Saturday, September 14, 2013

Paragraph for Peer Review

Are we born believing in God? A very simple yet complex question. In the world today you have a million different opinions being thrown at you. You can’t go anywhere or listen to anything without someone forcing their view into your mind. Wouldn’t it be nice if there was a reliable, unprejudiced source that wasn’t influenced in wrong ways? A place where people could share their opinions and exchange their ideas in a civil manner? I think I have found just that source. A blog called Big Questions Online. I plan to figure out how they keep the blog open-minded and what about the writing keeps the blog from taking a certain side. This blog speaks to open-minded individuals using unbiased and open opinions to discuss controversial questions.


The reason I chose this paragraph is because I feel like I do not grasp the reader's attention fast enough. And also because I feel as though I'm not being specific enough with what I'm trying to say.

No comments:

Post a Comment